導語：奧數網給同學們匯總了小學五年級英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為五年級英語作文范文：

　　A Field Trip

　　It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.

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　　寫法：這篇習作是按照郊游時的畫面來描述的，記敘了同學們分別在郊游中做了哪些活動及郊游的感受。

　　時態：這篇文章可以用一般過去時和現在進行時來寫。由于本單元主要講的是現在進行時，所以，這里我們采用現在進行時比較合適。

　　句型： ××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.

　　注意：活動的相關表述法采用新舊知識相結合去寫。注意時態的轉換、描寫感受時用一般現在時。